Entry 8

I was a little disappointed with the responses to my essay. This time around I only received one response. I will have to say however, that the response I did receive was great. I will make the changes suggested. Some of suggestions were that I did not have a page number listed with my heading, which I flat out forgot and, I need to change the format of my works cited within the text. I was hoping to get more response but I am happy with the one. I hope that the changes I make will improve my grade.