Entry 6

I have been thinking about where I can research my topic. I am definitely going to the library but other than that I was trying to think of other places. I have been in touch with a friend who really believes in spiritual healing and she was going to find out the names of several authors who have written about places that have spiritual healing. I am also going to check several search engines to find out what I can there for ideas of other places for research.

Blog #5

I thought that this next assignment would be fantastically easy. Write a persausive paper on a choosen topic. That was until I read the websites on how to write an effective persausive paper. Now the task seems a little bit daunting.
What I have learned from the websites will definitely prove to be helpful. I need to be very specific in my thesis statement. I need to address what I am discussing in the introduction and do so in a captivating way. I also need to consider who my audience is and what there opinions might be. I need to persuade them to agree with my ideas not force them into doing so. I do this by being specific, having sources that are extremely credible and by backing my sources up with specific information. To persuade I must be knowledgeable and use sources that are well respected. I believe that if I stick to what I have learned I will write a great persuasive essay.

Entry 4

When I started this assignment I first thought it would be difficult to revise. I did leave my essay pretty much as I had it. I did change a couple of things. The first thing that I changed was the placement of s couple of commas. This was done from the recommendation of one of my peers. The next thing that I changed was my works cited page. I put it in alphabetical order by the author's name, not by the website. I enjoyed the experience of having other people read my work and critique it. I love getting feedback where I can hear what others are saying and be able to improve what I have written. I was equally as excited to be able to grade my own work. It is hard to be non-partial but I really looked at what I have created and gave my self the grade I thought I deserved.

Entry 3

I really had fun with this assignment. I believe that constructive criticism is that absolute best way to number one find any mistakes that you over looked and to hear what others thought of your work. By "hearing what they have to say and applying all that you find useful, I do believe that it makes a better body of work. On that note I had three responses to my essay. The first was well thought out and had some great things for me to look at. It stated that though my essay introduction was good I needed to consider changing the conclusion. The reader felt as if the conclusion ended with me making a judgement call on whether I believed that telekinesis/ psychokinesis was real. I went over my paper several times and I see where she could have thought that I was leading towards persuasion but I think I will keep the original conclusion. I feel like it wraps up everything that I have covered in the body of the paragraph and leaves the reader with something to think about. The next item to work on is my works cited page. The same reader said that it was not in alphabetical order and that my resources were not indented. Again the indention I think came from me copying and pasting it to the page, as far as the alphabetical order I did look at that and believe that I have made the correct changes. I have been out of school for awhile and learning the MLA format is a whole new thing. Other then those two items there really wasn't a whole lot of substance to look at and consider. Which is flattering that the people who read it enjoyed it and felt that I completed the task at hand correctly, or close to correctly.